Thi ielts- task 2 writing^^

25-8 này thớt thi ielts, mình mới viết 1 bài task 2 trong phần writing, nay post lên cho ace nào sắp thi chung chấm điểm giùm, mong mọi người cho ý kiến, thanks ^^.


Đây là bài viết:


Đề:
some people think that newspaper provide lots of acknowledge to readers to study. Others say that they also have some negative effects on readers.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Bài làm:
It is no doubt to state that the significant improvement of economy, social and living standard, newspaper is increasingly becoming one of the indispensable and important things for supporting people. Personally i believe strongly that newspaper has some advantages and disadvantage which will be discussed below.

The advantages of newspapers are that they help people improve their knowledge about everything in life. Nowadays, with a newspaper, people can obtain lots of information such as social, scientific, economic news and so on when they stay at home. Besides, by using vivid images, newspaper is very clearly for people to know about a breaking news effectively and remember deeply. In addition, a major function of newspaper is advertising, if people want to sell their used cars or houses then newspaper is the best place for that. As a result, the more people read newspaper, the more profits they have.

However, \" everything has two sides\", despite the above explained the advantages of newspaper, newspaper also has some negative impacts to social community. In fact, a newspaper is created by a group of people, they can abuse bad information or news to distort the truth, making people can not aware what is bad and what is good. Moreover, newspaper can be used to spread worse informations about Government or Countries, being a cause of chaos and civilization.

In summary, this essay has just explain about the advantages and disadvantages of newspaper. I support that newspaper assit people in improving their knowledge. Also, newspaper is more and more popular for people's life. Finally, I recommend that newspaper will be more and more developed in the future and will be the most important thing worldwide.



p/s: mong mọi người giúp đỡ, cmt lịch sự ^^.